It's peanut butter chocolate time!

Today I was cleaning my pc when I found something rather...interesting, a old original story of mine, that I never finished.
Anyway, I started reading it, and was surprised, I've always considered my english a little...bad, so actually writing something like that in english seemed a little impossible, but apparently I did.

Now that my english is slightly better, I changed a couple of things about the first chapter, so today I'll share it with...well, whoever is interested in it.

So, if you're going to read it, be kind, and give advise or something. You know there will be a hell lot of typos in there...and other kind of mistakes.