The question that Steve Rogers asked himself every night, while touching the sleeping form of ... was not why or when he started sleeping with Tony Stark, but when he would stop.
Decent opening line, it hooked my interest, because I'm like, WAT? LOL. Man, I wish I were as proficient in writing in Spanish as you do in English.
I wish you had more conversation between Steve and Tony so we could have seen how they interacted, but it's a good window to the universe you want to play in. So. Write MOAR!
ZOMG, Ultimates fic, someone wrote Ultimates fic!
The question that Steve Rogers asked himself every night, while touching the sleeping form of ... was not why or when he started sleeping with Tony Stark, but when he would stop.
Decent opening line, it hooked my interest, because I'm like, WAT? LOL. Man, I wish I were as proficient in writing in Spanish as you do in English.
I wish you had more conversation between Steve and Tony so we could have seen how they interacted, but it's a good window to the universe you want to play in. So. Write MOAR!